Thursday, October 23, 2008

Grayness=Goodness

Progress report: goal/purpose: persuade me (project manager) that you have a clear vision for project and have a handle on it; to achieve this goal-->be specific in describing accomplishments
"specific"=I gathered these documents and what you did when analyzing those, be specific/not general
Be specific on things you've done, and things that you need to do.  Let him know that you have a handle on all the things that will go into making this project complete.  Describe in specific detail.  Be persuasive.  

Organizational/sections--every part has a purpose
Roman Numeralize!
Introduction: give a summary statement=are you on track, what will you do to get on track; short statement so he knows how things are going--
1) Project overview
2) Summary statement about progress

Body sections: 
1) Work completed
can have subcategories that talk about the types of work; talk about gathering texts, interviewing, others... Observation/interviews/collection of texts and ANALYZING the text; break it up by types of work or go chronologically; be specific when I can
2) Work remaining
similar organizational structure down here; drafting and writing the documents; refer back to plan of work in the proposal; showing a draft to the person you are studying

In 1 or 2, talk about problems I've had to this point; persuasive point=show him that there is a strategy to get through the problems; don't complain, show you know what you are going to do

Final section=a conclusion!
Pull from summary statement; think about overall goal, say where you are, tell if you're behind/ahead of schedule, how you're going to work; summarize where you are, and where you're going; you're strategy

Look on ecampus for examples of progress reports--look today, he'll put them up with comments--due date has been pushed back to November 6th.  No class on Election day!  November 4th. 

Bookness!
Reflect on readings for definitions of these terms: 
Premise: this is what you start out with, this is the basis for all your research/analysis of material; without this, you cannot continue (?)
Probability: anything can happen!  this is different from plausibility in that something plausible is probable... thank you, dictionaries...

"Local" within the realm of rhetoric deals with...
Premise: a statement that's assumed before an idea is explored; as someone's building an argument, a premise is an unstated assumption on which the argument is grounded; logical premise behind it; 
Probability: common ideas/interests that people share; dealing with issues of "likelihood", conclusion; draw a parallel to statements about human behavior

Deductive Reasoning: movement from general principles (class of items) to specific cases; if premises (assumptions/common beliefs) are true, then conclusion about specific case is true
Inductive Reasoning: movement from specific cases/examples to general principles

Enthymeme!  assumption is unstated in argument! rhetorical argument founded on assumptions that remain unstated

piece back together the enthymeme; the unstated items... we move backwards--
"If the glove doesn't fit, you must acquit" 

MAJOR premise: evidence doesn't fit the defendant, then you must acquit the defendant (grounded in assumption in the legal community)
MINOR premise: the glove is evidence
MINOR premise: the glove doesn't fit the defendant


SW: "Where would we be in this class without youtube?"
Youtube video=Holiday Inn Express - Fainter 
"Did anyone stay at a Holiday Inn Express last night?"
"I'm a doctor."
(more emphatically) "Did anyone stay..."

Build up enthymeme: 
MAJOR premise: Smart people are the best people to handle tough, difficult situations (in general)
MINOR premise: People who stay at a HIE are smart (General class=smart people)
Statement: "We need someone who stayed at a Holiday Inn Express last night to help this man"

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Wednesday, October 22, 2008

Enthymemes...hmm?

Enthymemes: These are a lot like syllogisms, but used in rhetoric, and not in scientific circles. "The premises used in construction rhetorical proofs differ from those used in dialectic and science only in the degree of certainty we can attach to them...Rhetors ordinarily use some widely held community belief as the major premise of their argument. Then they apply that premise to the particular case in which they are interested."

So...homework question number 3, p. 186:
Popular slogans are conclusions or premises of enthymemes, as stated in the book.  "Elvis has left the building"=part of a long argument whose other premises are never stated...I must articulate them...

Originally, the phrase was used to alert concert-goers of Elvis' departure from the premises, thus dashing their hopes of an encore performance.  Then, it was thrown into popular culture through lps and other records.  It then made its way into movies and such popular media, eventually being turned into a fairly common statement used in TV shows.  

The meaning now is basically "the show is over, go home".

I'm not sure exactly how to start this, but anyways...
X=...
Y is an example/reason of/for X
Therefore, it follows that Z

I will use this statement to mean that the show is over (show being anything from TV to live event).  

The show is over.
The main person in the show is no longer here, and there is nothing else to see.
Please leave.
Thus, Elvis has left the building.

Tuesday, October 21, 2008

Gray day = happy day

Types of analyzing data:
  1. Faigley's social perspective
  2. Intertextuality (Bazerman/Selzer): p. 88 wwd; 1) direct quotation, 2) indirect quotation, 3) mentioning another document, 4) commenting on another text, 5) using recognizable phrasing; categories of writing we see
  3. "Tracing writing process" (Prior): A) analyzing texts: same btw drafts, slightly revised, added, [deleted]; B) Thinking Aloud -->differentiating the different types of comments
  4. Influence of Workplace Culture on Writing/revising (editorial comments)
  5. Analyzing genres: Prominent Linguistic Features (uses active verbs, presents concrete details), Rhetorical features ( what is person doing to make argument in the progress report?), Organizational Features (chronological order)
  6. Speaking/writing Connection
  7. Rhetorical Theories: definitions/concepts can give as lenses to analyze what's happening in texts
  8. Coding data:reading all the collected data, looking for patterns, themes, similarities/differences to emerge

How do these work as a way of analyzing data that we collect/difference b/t this and analyzing throughout.

Freewrite: how will I gather data?  try to think specifically...how might I try to start making sense of things?
Going one by one through the types of analyses aforemetioned, the following is how I will use that to enable me to analyze the documents and such:
begin by observing the writer writing a document.  have him explain the thoughts that go through his head while writing, while taking an inventory of what he does/uses to help him get the writing done.  once that is completed, or when he comes to a stopping place (but will add more later), ask him questions about why he chose certain words/phrases.  ask about the tone of the document, as well as the level of understanding needed to read the document and take out meaning (i.e. does the person reading the document at the other end need to be an expert in that field, or is it fine for a novice to read?).  continue to ask him questions about why he chose certain words over others.  then, observe the correcting/continuation of the document.  when that is finished, begin the questions again...



Triangulation: As you analyze data from one source, consider/analyze data you've collected from another source--does it confirm, challenge, complicate your initial analysis?